Sneak Peak At The New Website

[Whizz-Bizz]

http://whizzbizzsales.com

Just as it says really, I thought as everyone gave me so much ribbing about the last one, Id give you all a sneak peak before the official launch date of the 15th

Any feedback as always is appreciated

 

[Dodger]

Well it's better than the old one at least, just.

It's still very home made looking mate, not much of an improvement to be honest.

 

[Whizz-Bizz]

What do you want to see on there ? I got a firm to do it.

 

[OoO]

I think it looks good.

Just oner very quick point though. No photo of a WFP guy? That would suggest to me you don't do it, and I would look elsewhere and not even read it /emoticons/smile.png

Is that who you used...

http://www.websitetogo.co.uk/ ?

 

[Whizz-Bizz]

good comment Damo, Ill have a chat with the girl about that, see if I can squeeze a pic in, should I take the trad pic out or leave it in

 

[OoO]

good comment Damo' date=' Ill have a chat with the girl about that, see if I can squeeze a pic in, should I take the trad pic out or leave it in [/quote']Me personally. I would have a trad pic on one side and WFP on the other side. Under each pic a blurb.

TRAD and WFP are totally diifferent as you know.

"Whizz-Bizz understands yours needs as a traditional window cleaner. We will look at ladder placement and access"

"Whizz-Bizz understands yours needs as a pure water window cleaner, we will sell the service on being able to clean 2nd story upwards and frames every time at no extra cost"

That kinda rubbish /emoticons/wink.png

 

[derek]

I'll do my best at the constructive critic thing

In all honestly that looks **** mate, VERY homemade looking and a bit all over the place hope text aint very nice either you didnt pay much for that?

I would talk to Iain on here and get him to sort you out a professional one as that does look rotten ,

Another few little suggestions?

A) I would look at getting a landline number perhaps an 0800 number? as a mobile aint the most professional approach?

B) Why did you decide on the name whizzbizz?

Hope you dont think im sticking a dig in again lol

 

[derek]

http://www.gizoogle.net/index.php?search=http%3A%2F%2Fwhizzbizzsales.com%2Findex.html&se=Gizoogle+Dis+Shiznit
Just as it says really, I thought as everyone gave me so much ribbing about the last one, Id give you all a sneak peak before the official launch date of the 15th

Any feedback as always is appreciated

I wouldnt use pimped out asses on my website either afterall you are going for a professional approach?

 

[OoO]

I hope you never rushed the site due to people saying your old site looks s*** As tbh i have noticed a few things as a window cleaner that would actually put me off. Now I have read through it /emoticons/sad.png

 

[derek]

I hope you never rushed the site due to people saying your old site looks s*** As tbh i have noticed a few things as a window cleaner that would actually put me off. Now I have read through it /emoticons/sad.png

Me too, Do feel sorry for old whizzybizzy

 

[derek]

Its not got a lot of content either, load a bloody hard to read text but not full of content, maybe try adding a few more pages or something maybe?

 

[OoO]

But on the flip side, i will be using him. Not yet, i need my leaflets making/printing.

I am pretty much broke and its not even the end of jan. /emoticons/sad.png

 

[OoO]

Its not got a lot of content either' date=' load a bloody hard to read text but not full of content, maybe try adding a few more pages or something maybe?[/quote']Yeah i think thats it. Its hard work reading it, I was ffs hurry up and get to the point. Where are the testimonials and how much is it gonna cost.

I read one page, and mouse wheel was scrolling so i ended up with reading this

There will be problems as customers:

• Can cancel stating they are not happy with the work

• Simply change their minds

• Just wanted a window cleaner for a 1 off clean and didn’t tell us this was the case.

• Homes/Access maybe difficult to locate

• Maybe a wrong telephone number

• Claim they were told it was free

I was like hmmmm that is not great to read. I went back and read some more, and I was like it's ok.

 

[derek]

Yeah i think thats it. Its hard work reading it, I was ffs hurry up and get to the point. Where are the testimonials and how much is it gonna cost.
I read one page, and mouse wheel was scrolling so i ended up with reading this

There will be problems as customers:

• Can cancel stating they are not happy with the work

• Simply change their minds

• Just wanted a window cleaner for a 1 off clean and didn’t tell us this was the case.

• Homes/Access maybe difficult to locate

• Maybe a wrong telephone number

• Claim they were told it was free

I was like hmmmm that it great to read, only cos i know him. I went back and read more.

Yeah its like reading a txt from someone all in caps bloody annoying and you lose intrest almost immediatley

 

[OoO]

Yeah its like reading a txt from someone all in caps bloody annoying and you lose intrest almost immediatley

Or What About When People Use Caps Lock On Every Word LOL

 

[derek]

Or What About When People Use Caps Lock On Every Word LOL

I KNOW ITS SO DAMN ANNOYING WHEN PEOPLE DO THAT ISNT IT?

 

[Dodger]

I'll do my best at the constructive critic thing
In all honestly that looks **** mate, VERY homemade looking and a bit all over the place hope text aint very nice either you didnt pay much for that?

a professional one

You do mean a wordpress template I presume thats exactly the same as the 20 quid one lol.

 

[derek]

You do mean a wordpress template I presume thats exactly the same as the 20 quid one lol.

Eh..... you get my drift dodge you bugger lol

 

[Dodger]

Eh..... you get my drift dodge you bugger lol

I'm not sure you're getting mine though Derek lol

 

[derek]

I'm not sure you're getting mine though Derek lol

spill then lol

 

[Whizz-Bizz]

I think it looks good.
Just oner very quick point though. No photo of a WFP guy? That would suggest to me you don't do it, and I would look elsewhere and not even read it /emoticons/smile.png

Is that who you used...

http://www.websitetogo.co.uk/ ?

Yes I did use websites to go how you know that ? and Dereck you got way to much time on your hands to make up a chillabitches one up