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Discussion in 'Advertising Offline/Online & Canvassing' started by kahoona, Apr 11, 2014.

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  1. kahoona

    kahoona Well-Known Member
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    Hi all,

    Following JJ's thread I thought I would run my first attempt by you all. let me know your thoughts and suggestions for improvements or changes to errors you spot (apart from the obvious bits that need filling in ;-)

    cheers K
     
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  2. kahoona

    kahoona Well-Known Member
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    PS I have done a goole and i'm nothing to do with the guys in Benfleet! I wonder if I will need change the name from RG window cleaning service to something else?
     
  3. Tuffers

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    You use 'and' and '&' plus capital letters on some words and not others. I'm not sure which words should have CAPS though myself :confused:. Looks good though :thumbsup:
     
  4. laddergarder

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    I would have
    (Regular, friendly and reliable service.) as apposed to
    (Regular, Friendly and Reliable service).

    But looks good pal, simple and to the point.
     
  5. cheapncheerful

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    looks the part to me ....:)
     
  6. kahoona

    kahoona Well-Known Member
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    cheers fellas, here is a revised version, I have faded the blue swooshes so they don't distract too much from the text. I have registered the domain name today and i'll get a holding page set up over the weekend.

    Business card design next...
     
  7. Gav

    Gav Grand Master
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    I like it. Very smart

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  8. Joshua D

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    I like it too very simple and easy to understand :)
     
  9. laddergarder

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    much better. I did notice you have RG Window Cleaning Service. Then rgwindowcleaning.co.uk as your site address. I would stick to rg window cleaning, and drop the service. When it comes to business names keep it short and simple. Its easier to remember, and will fit on business cards, flyers, logo'ed tshirts etc allot better.
     
  10. Gav

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    Yes would agree with ladder here.

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