New Biz Card/advert

[wilgold]

Hi guys been working on my new business card. Gonna use it to replace my old ads in the local business booklet which i advertise in 2. What do u think?

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[wilgold]

Forgot to mention its in b&w coz colour ads in the booklet cost loads lol

 

[Pegasus]

Looks great I think, and also your website. Concise and to the point. Just what most customers need and want I would think.

A couple of English errors on your website is the only minor negative point to sort.

Nice one.

 

[wilgold]

Website is still in progress. Cheers bud ill have a look English isn't my strong point lol

 

[harunh]

Not bad for blak n wite

 

[HotWash Window Cleaners]

Looks cheap.

 

[mark m]

ok

 

[harunh]

Looks cheap.

Anyfin thats blak n wyt looks cheap /emoticons/tongue.png lol

 

[Gmeister]

Nice and simple is the game, trust me, over complicating leaflets and business cards puts people off reading it, and end up throw away!

 

[DanC]

Sorry not my cup of tea, looks very low quality, website really needs some work too!! Picture all stretched. Just being honest, no offence intended.

 

[Catherine]

Wilgold, are you going to have any colour on it?

 

[OoO]

The advert screams your a local cleaner and not expensive.

Depending on what magazine this goes into should do well.

Some people don't have a clue when it comes to business. But these are the people who will still be stuck with one car/van in 10 years time.

 

[Catherine]

Were you using for ad or business card, Wilgold?

 

[wilgold]

Ok cheers for the comments back to the drawing board! The website is still work in progress