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Discussion in 'Managing Your Business' started by wax_addict, Apr 20, 2013.

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  1. wax_addict

    wax_addict Member
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    I've got a flyer sorted, hoping you guys could give me bit of feedback.

    I looked about online and used tidbits from other flyers, mainly the house/teeth line, but tried to keep it as simple as possible and otherwise quite original and not a full on template. Maybe move the logo over to the left? Anything I'm missing?

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  2. Catherine

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    Lol, I like the line about yellow teeth - original...

    I think the text is a little low down, 2/3rds, but that's just my opinion... I see loads of flyers, but im no designer myself.
     
  3. HotWash Window Cleaners

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    It's not bad, would probably make picture smaller and writing slightly bigger. Personally I would not put the bit about yellow teeth but that's just my opinion.
    Only way to tell is get them through the letter boxes and get that phone ringing.
    On mine I always say call now and get your frames, sills and doors included every time we clean.
    Tell them to do something to get something. Simple really. I don't say for free!
     
  4. Catherine

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    Yea, I think although amusing, maybe not the bit about the yellow teeth. Hot wash is right, you need an action line to get them to do something
     
  5. wax_addict

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    Cheers guys. Yeah I'll remove the teeth thing and try enlarging the text, see how that looks.

    Good point with do something/get something, I'll add something in there.
     
  6. OoO

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    Do you offer any other services. Or is it just window cleaning?
     
  7. OoO

    OoO Guest

    First bit of text mentions window cleaning twice. Doesn't read right.
     
  8. Catherine

    Catherine Guest

    Think also Wax would centralize the header, the old left to right thing again.
     
  9. Dodger

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    Like the bullet points, number is way too small, I think window cleaning isn't big enough and it's white over the whitest part of the image maybe a little bigger and move it to the left.

    All in all though quite good actually mate.
     
  10. Dodger

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    Oh and to make the logo and window cleaning stand out a little more, keeping with the colours I might add a yellow stroke. Just thin and 50-60 percent transparency.
     
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