How Does This Look?

Discussion in 'Advertising Offline/Online & Canvassing' started by buzzing, Aug 16, 2012.

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  1. buzzing

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  2. mark m

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    I like the title in blue and the bottom bit in blue inc water drops but not sure about the rest the font just dont quiet look right
     
  3. Paul

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    Looks good mate apart from the white txt on the blue bavkground it's quite hard to read
     
  4. me5380

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    yeah must agree its not easy on the eyes,the bottom in blueis fantastic just a few tips when designing a leaflet.

    There are some words that are known for being good at attracting people’s attention. They include – avoid, free, bargain, bonus, discover, earn, easy, enjoy, exciting, exclusive, extra, fast, how to, learn, money, mystery, new, profit, save, special, win. Try to naturally incorporate these words into your text.

    Use Images

    The saying goes that a picture says a thousand words so think about using one. Make sure it’s relevant and reinforces what is being said or the brand image that you’re trying to portray.
    A Call to Action

    Tell people what to do next, but not in a passive way. “For more information, call…” is a passive call to action. It doesn’t motivate action. Instead, use one of the following closing lines:
    Book before (Date) and get 10% off
    Buy now – 10% off for the first 50 customers

    The fact is you only get a couple ofseconds between someone picking your leaflet up and walking to the recycle bin so it needs to have a real good headline to grab peoples attention and read it.

    i am a big beliver in leaflets and would post them all day long as a good leaflet may bring in a 2.5% response rate so 1000 leaflets posted in 5 hour should give you 25 new customers ,

    people love the words free and offer we are all guilty of buying the offer rather than the product,an example of this would be the 8 jars of pasta sauce i have in the pantry ,buy on get one free,they get my missus every time the fact is we dont need any more sauce but she felt like she was getting a good offer
     
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    How does this look?

    i did a photo of myself cleaning but didn't have uniform on didn't look professional- what should be in a photo?
     
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    looks better i think maybe cage te font to a bolder one on the first 50 customers,its good you now ave wats called a call to action,if they were mine i would prob put call before friday and save x %,but its everyones own preferenence,to be onest wat you sould really do is have a selection of different leaflets post tem all in seperate areas and you can gauge wic one works best.

    how many you aving printed by the way?
     
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    I was thinking 500 as I was going to canvassing and not just post them through doors, could get lots more done


    Also when canvassing is it just a case of trying to get neighbours so you aren't driving all over the place. And should I have my gear ready and waiting to clean if they want it then ?
     
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    if you are going to print 500 te cost would be around £28 ,ebay you could prob get around 5000 for tat price and it saves alot of assle

    i would not just do 500 cos you will post em and not get a great response,i would just post 1000 a day and canvass for a few nigt time hours,dont waste leaflets when knocking just give tem a business card alot cheaper that way .
     
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    I like it, font could maybe be changed for the better but nice design seems friendly and professional.
     
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