Is Flyer Too Busy

Discussion in 'Advertising Offline/Online & Canvassing' started by me5380, Aug 26, 2012.

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  1. me5380

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    hi please let me know your thoughts
     

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  2. All Round Cleaning

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    In mY opinion yes .

    Firstly lose the water background it makes it hard to read .

    Secondly use a solid colour text not see through , it just makes it easier to read .

    Just a plain simple a5 white piece of paper will do .
    In my opinion .
     
  3. GMcleaning

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    i like it, i think it looks good! maybe try it without the water dripping in the background, maybe just a plain background but tbh i dont think it looks too busy/cluttered as it is
     
  4. rcproperty

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    yer i think it is a little to busy, if the background was a lot lighter and more of a watermark and the words one colour it would look better.
    dont need your phone number or saying about free quote twice tho!
     
  5. M.K Cleaners.co.uk

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    The L in let is capitalized.

    You could capitalize the the first letters in Fast - Friendly - Reliable - Fully Insured

    I would take the word ''Fast'' out too, there paying you a fixed amount for a job. If you say your fast the may take it the wrong way.
     
  6. garyboy

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    I like them! To the point but agree just keep 1 telephone maybe in the last bubble put where did i put that leaflet for window cleaning
     
  7. rcproperty

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    thats a good idea!!!
     
  8. harunh

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    It looks good but the saying " your panes our pleasure" is very old n boring now lol
     
  9. mark m

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    What do i know i like it :D
     
  10. muzza

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    looks good mate but friendly should be spelt like this, I would put a ? after your heading too and fix the capital L but I like the idea overall.
     
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