Discussion in 'Advertising Offline/Online & Canvassing' started by me5380, Aug 26, 2012.
hi please let me know your thoughts
In mY opinion yes .
Firstly lose the water background it makes it hard to read .
Secondly use a solid colour text not see through , it just makes it easier to read .
Just a plain simple a5 white piece of paper will do .
In my opinion .
i like it, i think it looks good! maybe try it without the water dripping in the background, maybe just a plain background but tbh i dont think it looks too busy/cluttered as it is
yer i think it is a little to busy, if the background was a lot lighter and more of a watermark and the words one colour it would look better.
dont need your phone number or saying about free quote twice tho!
The L in let is capitalized.
You could capitalize the the first letters in Fast - Friendly - Reliable - Fully Insured
I would take the word ''Fast'' out too, there paying you a fixed amount for a job. If you say your fast the may take it the wrong way.
I like them! To the point but agree just keep 1 telephone maybe in the last bubble put where did i put that leaflet for window cleaning
thats a good idea!!!
It looks good but the saying " your panes our pleasure" is very old n boring now lol
What do i know i like it
looks good mate but friendly should be spelt like this, I would put a ? after your heading too and fix the capital L but I like the idea overall.