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[mark m]

playing around with my flyer what do you think of it ?

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[Tuffers]

It should read 'we are now bringing' and not 'we are now bring'

Apart from that it looks a bit full /emoticons/biggrin.png

 

[DDs]

There's far to much on the page. I had a quick look and still none the wiser to what it's about.

 

[Solarpanelcleanington]

Apostrophe s on year's as its possessive innit.

I'm really looking forward to it. The wife is less enthusiastic. Ain't got a clue which hotel I booked.

 

[steve garwood]

Its also missing 'steve Garwood will be there" :thumbsup:

 

[steve garwood]

Apostrophe s on year's as its possessive innit.
I'm really looking forward to it. The wife is less enthusiastic. Ain't got a clue which hotel I booked.

Lol. My wife still cannot believe she is coming with me either. Keep telling her she's living the dream

 

[peter rogers]

It's to busy took me a while to notice date on it

 

[norm]

i like the one on the left more than the one on the right

 

[WWC]

Too busy IMO.

If the reader doesn't know what it's about in the first 1 or 2 seconds, then it's ignored.