Discussion in 'Chit Chat & Introductions' started by mark m, Mar 23, 2016.
playing around with my flyer what do you think of it ?
It should read 'we are now bringing' and not 'we are now bring'
Apart from that it looks a bit full
There's far to much on the page. I had a quick look and still none the wiser to what it's about.
Apostrophe s on year's as its possessive innit.
I'm really looking forward to it. The wife is less enthusiastic. Ain't got a clue which hotel I booked.
Its also missing 'steve Garwood will be there"
Lol. My wife still cannot believe she is coming with me either. Keep telling her she's living the dream
It's to busy took me a while to notice date on it
i like the one on the left more than the one on the right
Too busy IMO.
If the reader doesn't know what it's about in the first 1 or 2 seconds, then it's ignored.