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  1. mark m

    mark m Hero
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    playing around with my flyer what do you think of it ?
     

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  2. Tuffers

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    It should read 'we are now bringing' and not 'we are now bring'

    Apart from that it looks a bit full :D
     
  3. DDs

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    There's far to much on the page. I had a quick look and still none the wiser to what it's about.
     
  4. Solarpanelcleanington

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    Apostrophe s on year's as its possessive innit.

    I'm really looking forward to it. The wife is less enthusiastic. Ain't got a clue which hotel I booked.
     
  5. steve garwood

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    Its also missing 'steve Garwood will be there" :thumbsup:
     
  6. steve garwood

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    Lol. My wife still cannot believe she is coming with me either. Keep telling her she's living the dream
     
  7. peter rogers

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    It's to busy took me a while to notice date on it
     
  8. norm

    norm Grand Master
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    i like the one on the left more than the one on the right
     
  9. WWC

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    Too busy IMO.

    If the reader doesn't know what it's about in the first 1 or 2 seconds, then it's ignored.
     
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