What do you think of my website so far?

Discussion in 'Chit Chat & Introductions' started by Anthony @ SCS, Dec 5, 2014.

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  1. Anthony @ SCS

    Anthony @ SCS Active Member
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    So far got 10 customers, all friends and family lol, well except one. He is my friends neighbour :whistle:

    I'm doing them all trad for now as wont be getting my WFP trolley until the new year and then the Van etc when my accident claim is sorted (got hit by a car in May, totaled my motorbike, popped by shoulder and elbow, and broken my collar bone which still hasn't fully healed yet ..... even after 2 operations.

    Anyway. I thought id start the ball rolling a bit more now i'm making a little money and build my website etc.

    what do you think so far? www.squeakycleansolutions.co.uk it's still a work-in-progress but a few hours over the next few days will see it finished.

    Yes, the name is a little ...... well ...... feminine ...... blame the future wife :itwasntme: ......... this is the only input she wanted to have and is now fired from the firm lol.

    Still need to do more work on it, it is mobile friendly, needs a bit more tweaking and is better viewed on a PC or Laptop to appreciate it fully. I have stole some of the wording from other sites just to get an idea and fill space but i have been going through it and putting my own twist on it. Some stuff i will need to remove also.

    My logo is still in production, went over to fiverr to see if they can make a better design than me lol.

    Anyway, thoughts and criticism welcome.
     
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  2. PTWC

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    #2 PTWC, Dec 5, 2014
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    :)Rubbish
     
  3. boarcity

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    i read on your site that you are dissing the trad , id not do that if i was you

    going wfp you wont be squeaking any windows either , now will you
     
  4. Anthony @ SCS

    Anthony @ SCS Active Member
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    Ouch lol
     
  5. Anthony @ SCS

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    I see your point, I didn't mean to diss trad, just wanted to make it known that WFP was the rout I was going.

    Will re-word it, thanks
     
  6. norm

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    hi Anthony just going to be honest and not saying i am right
    dont like it from start to finish and would recommend Njones on here to sort ya
    good luck :thumbsup:
     
  7. Anthony @ SCS

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    What is it that you don't like?
     
  8. PTWC

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    (Sorry, i know im a bit tongue in cheek with comments sometimes, so don't take it personally),
    But the website, it's all wrong.
    Really there's not much good there mate
    Try and go real simple.
    It will work better for you.
    Make sure all the links can be seen in one view without having to scroll to see more of them.
    Have a few short pages.
    Personally I would leave out all the false hype.
    Its window cleaning not medical research.
    Be succinct. [​IMG]
     
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    Definitely ditch the trad bashing part, particularly if you're going to offer that service a few lines down. :D

    The bit at the top has no real reference to window cleaning, so I had to scroll down to find out what you do.

    Get rid of the company director part. From your writings underneith it is very clear you're just a one man band, so don't try and act otherwise.

    Don't give people the option to skip a clean, it will cost you dearly, and you'll get messed about a lot.

    Your frequency of visits is too vague: you're telling them you are monthly, but then saying you'll come whenever. By all means give them options, but don't give them open season to dictate your work schedule.

    Hope that helps mate. No one likes hearing critisism of their work, but in the case of this you'll be glad folk have helped you see things from another perspective. :thumbsup:
     
  10. Anthony @ SCS

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    Thanks for all the comments

    Don't worry I didn't take any of it personally, it's all constructive so very appreciated.
     
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